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#137902 - 05/10/10 12:26 AM Looking for critique
council Offline
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Registered: 10/16/07
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Loc: murfreesboro, tn
Hi. Check out the link and give it a listen. I'd like to know what ya think.

http://audio.tutsplus.com/articles/works.../#comment-49720


Edited by council (05/10/10 12:34 AM)

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#137904 - 05/10/10 03:35 AM Re: Looking for critique [Re: council]
EWF Offline
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First of all, I like the song. As for the audio quality, it sounds a bit muddy to me. It sounds like all the instrumentation including the drums are all fighting for the same midrange frequency space. Perhaps you could replace the snare with something a little snappier and bring the hi-hat up in the mix.

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#137906 - 05/10/10 06:41 AM Re: Looking for critique [Re: EWF]
Kecinzer Offline
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Agree with EWF. Nice guitar, the piece has a lot of potential (it's asking to go somewhere) but it needs some serious work... especially the drums - actually, you should completely redo the drum track.

Kind of "Yes-ish" ... get to it!
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#137912 - 05/10/10 12:09 PM Re: Looking for critique [Re: Kecinzer]
council Offline
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Registered: 10/16/07
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Loc: murfreesboro, tn
Thanks, guys. I agree with you. I felt it was kinda muddy but kinda lost perspective on it I think. I'll work on some eq and see if I can free up some mid freq's. No doubt the drums need work. Perhaps I'll bring in a real drummer when I've got a few tracks nearly complete. Thanks again for listening.

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#137914 - 05/10/10 01:35 PM Re: Looking for critique [Re: council]
noah330 Offline
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Registered: 01/02/04
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Loc: Massachusetts
I like it.

The drums sound ok, but the sounds (IMHO) don't really fit the genre.

Everything sounds good though.
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